Little 2.
rain more
a part
of garden growing
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. . New content has been loaded.
-- some poems and information from Janette Stowell, who has a book coming out →
-- recent work from various participants →
-- a slow form record
of the physical machine-gun →
-- a radio transmission clip →
E-mail submissions/enquiries welcomed: backtothemachinegun@hotmail.com
I like the way this could be read in differnet ways. Not taking anything away from your intention of course -
ReplyDelete'rain apart, more of garden growing' etc. Like a western haiku. Kerouac always argued that English could not fit the strict Japanese syllables required, so a western haiku should be a simple statement, eloquently stated.
'a' and 'part' are actually the words closest together. Intersting.
thank you . You seem to have got the thing . Zukofsky does a lot of the "ambiguous multi-reading" thing. We should all read zukofsky this christmas.
ReplyDelete---- and yes, it is crazy to try and do haiku using japanese syllabic form, especially when translating. All the sparseness would get cluttered with the little words.
- - - let's think of new ways to use our own little words
perhaps it should be garden
ReplyDelete/ - ing
I just dont know whats good anymore
Jean-Michel?
ReplyDelete........./ Let's go to Pittsburgh / ......