Little 3 - 6 . 

  3.                                        4.
   rootless  berry  picked up     rain that constantly offers
  ,shoreline,  another day,  over ,          garment

  5.                                        6.
    inside,                              what offers patience
   back to the window,                      ?      future
    outside,                                  offer
                                                   things

5 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 January 2007 at 17:56:00 GMT

    let's not necessarily think of these as being concise in nature. If you need a start for your thinking.
    - don't things get bigger, the smaller you are -

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  2. Anonymous26 January 2007 at 17:14:00 GMT

    so, converesely, the smaller the pome, the bigger it makes the reader?

    Haiku's therefore must
    make all who read them feel
    wonderful through to soul

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  3. Anonymous26 January 2007 at 17:15:00 GMT

    I spelt conversely wrong.

    Now I feel deep shame.

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  4. Anonymous15 February 2007 at 15:16:00 GMT

    size is from a point of reference. All things are very great and small.
    all the world malevolent, benevolent, and the dual-nature which can't mean anything.
    -it's disturbing

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  5. MALALE26 October 2008 at 17:03:00 GMT

    I must have been in a mood when I wrote the last comment.

    The "Little" poems seem to have been working OK.

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